Mitchell walks into the mall. He peers to his left, a smirk traveling
across his face as he sees the buy one get one free donut deal. But then he
remembers he came to the mall for blue vans. Pulling out the $20 in his
pocket he must make a decision. He ponders weather or not he should spend his
parents money on the delicious, mouth watering looking donuts, or the blue vans
he has been asking for for months. Hesitantly he starts toward the shoe store,
but stumbles over his own feet, falling to the ground and dropping his precious
$20 bill. The tears start rolling down his face as he realizes he cannot get
the donuts or the shoes now.
I wasn't sure where this was going at first, but I like it. This is something that would so happen to me. You did a great job describing the dilemma in a few short sentences. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is kind of funny but describes me because I'm broke and hungry.
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